Monday, March 13, 2017

Altered Fates: Looser (Part 3)


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8 comments:

  1. I like it. Looking forward to see where this goes.

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    1. Glad you liked it. Not sure what else I want to do with this one. I'll have to think about it.

      Cheers
      Zapper

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  2. Hey Zapper. Just curious, is the blonde Ivy, because I feel that you meant to say Iris but its Ivy, but I could be mistaken.

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    1. Ninja,

      Nope. Good catch. The blonde is the woman Dan saw trying on clothes. Ivy was a typeo it should have been Iris.

      Cheers
      Zapper

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  3. Lovin' it. Can't wait. Your stories are so much fun.

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    1. I'm glad you like them!

      Cheers
      Zapper

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  4. What is Dan up too? I bet even you don''t know, what a twisted tale! I'm trying to find my head to put my hat one trying to figure it out.
    PS that Blond is a real babe! WOW!

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    1. The real Dan is now wearing the blonde's body. He's about to go out and mess with his sister Hazel (still stuck in his masculine body) while pretending to be a total stranger. The real Iris (now wearing Hazel's body) is off on a date with Hazel's boyfriend who she's had a crush on for some time. lol

      Cheers
      Zapper

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