Tuesday, January 24, 2017

Altered Fates: The Test (Part 4, "The End")


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8 comments:

  1. Well, at least Jessica's grades are up. After an understandable amount of sulking perhaps she'll make something of her new life.

    The best revenge is living well after all.

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    1. I think that Chris realizes that he likes life better now than before. But it takes a bit for him to come to that conclusion.

      Cheers
      Zapper

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  2. Really glad I entrusted this request to you! Thanks again for doing it mate. Cant wait to see more of your caps

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    1. I'm very happy that you enjoyed my take on your idea. :-)

      Cheers
      Zapper

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  3. LOL OUCH! Poor guy - what a terible friend.Great story, many excellent touches like 'Chris' insisting on call the former man Jessica & being glad you get 'your' grades up & the bland way the new Chris talking of stealing a friends loife - excusing it for saying that was before I met Grace.
    I wonder if the new Chris & Grace get married.?

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    1. I don't think so. At the moment it the "new" Chris is in love with his new life, body, and the pleasures it brings. Over time they figure out that it was purely carnal. They break up and find other people to spend their lives with.

      Cheers
      Zapper

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  4. Fantastic series! I love what you did with this request!

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    1. Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

      Cheers
      Zapper

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