Friday, May 18, 2018

Altered Fates: The BFF


  1. not as smoothly written as most of your work, but till LOL OUCH! I love the touch that he begs to stay her & be a stripper.

  2. I'd love to see a followup about the new Thea's lot in life a few months later. Has she truly adapted? Does she miss her old life? Does she keep in touch with her wife? Does her wife figure out what happened to "Nolan" and if she did, does she like the new Nolan enough to leave the old one to his fate?

  3. oh, & thanks for a wrong person changed back story! Its so funny to have a dominating man as a submissive stripper.


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