he believes that he killed his best friend/brother
all his friends are being hunted, he has no future, no chance at a life
he is effectively waiting to die
this story has beautiful art
the writer has zero idea how the police operate, no idea that computer access is protected by passwords, that you have to know a lot about procedures, things non cops would know
it is ridiculous to think a criminal could fake being a cop
still it is better than the nothing that is out there
"PTSD" hahahahah your comment is as serious as the aim of a stormtrooper, The Writer of "AN INTERNAL AFFAIR" is great 10/10 we want the series animated!
So I'm very much in the beggars can't be choosers category, so I usually keep my opinion to myself, but since you seem to have had a rough time getting this story published here is what I think of your work.
It's honestly great, you are definitely in the top 10% of caption and comic creators now. You have just the right mix of story and sexy to bring me back every week. So on behalf of all the lurkers (and I'm sure there are many) keep doing what your doing we're with you all the way.
And on the Story side I was sure the other Mob boss had FOSE'd with the ex wife/girlfriend and she was using his body to keep him in her body in line. If that is really the medallion of zulo I'm hoping to see Francis's friend get swapped with the detective's girlfriend. And if the detective gets out of prison I'm hoping to see some tricking her with her girlfriends body sort of situation. That is if you take recommendations, otherwise I very much like your storytelling.
this is better than obi wan.
ReplyDeleteKenobi is a story about a guy with PTSD
Deletehe believes that he killed his best friend/brother
all his friends are being hunted, he has no future, no chance at a life
he is effectively waiting to die
this story has beautiful art
the writer has zero idea how the police operate, no idea that computer access is protected by passwords, that you have to know a lot about procedures, things non cops would know
it is ridiculous to think a criminal could fake being a cop
still it is better than the nothing that is out there
I genuinely have zero idea how the two ideas you presented are connected
DeleteLMAO
Deletethank you, that helps to clarify so much about the readers of this web comic
"PTSD" hahahahah your comment is as serious as the aim of a stormtrooper, The Writer of "AN INTERNAL AFFAIR" is great 10/10 we want the series animated!
DeleteSo I'm very much in the beggars can't be choosers category, so I usually keep my opinion to myself, but since you seem to have had a rough time getting this story published here is what I think of your work.
ReplyDeleteIt's honestly great, you are definitely in the top 10% of caption and comic creators now. You have just the right mix of story and sexy to bring me back every week. So on behalf of all the lurkers (and I'm sure there are many) keep doing what your doing we're with you all the way.
And on the Story side I was sure the other Mob boss had FOSE'd with the ex wife/girlfriend and she was using his body to keep him in her body in line. If that is really the medallion of zulo I'm hoping to see Francis's friend get swapped with the detective's girlfriend. And if the detective gets out of prison I'm hoping to see some tricking her with her girlfriends body sort of situation. That is if you take recommendations, otherwise I very much like your storytelling.
ReplyDeleteThe mystery around the necklace is great. I wonder why the new detective went to talk to Hannah.
ReplyDeleteso, the comic is dead?
ReplyDeleteseriously made little sense